(I dont like romance (unless it is LGBT) but here is my honest review) Your story plotline is interesting, I cannot compare it to anything since I dont’t read romance like this nor female lead (unless it is for a review swap). I do like that you do not automatically make her fall in love with him, so good job on building your story. Your pacing is good. I like the comedy feel that goes with it and how you show the emotions of the MC. The only problem I see is your wording; the way you word a few things are wrong at times (with the tenses and stuff) which messes up the flow of the story. But rereading it or putting it through grammarly would help it. Other than that, you are fine. Keep up the good work!
Nattychris_22
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