This story is very well written. The beginning is awesome. After the first chapter, the story's pace slowed down a little and moves smoothly. Then, the interaction between Kylee and Jazz amused me a little. All in all, it's a good read. Keep it up, author!
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!