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Spill_The_Tea
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Writing looks looks great, tho needs for background info but im sure we'll be filled in on the next chapter. Very nice dynamic with nami and hal, I find their relationship adorable. Overall, good story!

The Trials of Mortality

JMotyras

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thank u, I'm still much of a beginner, and yes I will be fleshing out more of the background on future chapters ^-^