Review Detail of SolAce in The Color of Night

The plot unfolds with a young woman, who is clearly traumatized. What it is, I shall not say, so you, yes you reader, must find out for yourself. While reading this, I found the flow to be quite good; overall, I see this as a promising read. In terms of grammar issues, other than one other misspelling, the grammatical error I found most frequently was run-on sentences, something which is easily made by a large majority of writers. My advice to you would be to comb through your chapters while using grammarly or another grammar correcting app to assist you. ( heard grammarly might not be able to pick out run-on sentences, but it is still worth a try ) However, I think this has great potential if it could be polished a bit more, so keep up the good work, Author !