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Austin_Scanlon
Austin_ScanlonLv23yrAustin_Scanlon

I like the premise of Save State. It gives room for a lot of experimenting with different Timelines. I have only read two chapters so far but I do enjoy the concept. Problems? Make sure to edit. Swear or don't. Character Design is flat for now. Very Dialogue heavy. Maybe I will read more later but Grammer mistakes are a pet peeve of mine.

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EleAxis

Liked it!

いいね

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EleAxis
EleAxis作者EleAxis

Guess I'll revise later then. My first time writing. Sorry for the mistakes tho

EleAxis
EleAxis作者EleAxis

It's still in the early phase after all. It'll be focusing on action and confrontations later on

EleAxis
EleAxis作者EleAxis

Maybe after 15 chapters? I guess

EleAxis:Guess I'll revise later then. My first time writing. Sorry for the mistakes tho