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TheElisse
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Your story is great. I was just confused with the prologue. The plot is interesting, characters are were developed and I really like it so far. I didn´t see any mistake. Overall a great book

Outside Paradise

Hendinklette

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Thank you for taking the time to read and review the Book! What confusion did you have with the prologue? Is there anything I can fix?