Review Detail of aboshwkey in The Strongest Shinobi {Naruto}

Item: The Strongest Shinobi {Naruto}
Rating: 3.8

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aboshwkeyLv53yraboshwkey

hello ... first its interesting ... second i like it ... but.... please put life in the story . dialogue and other characters in .. what you are doing now is narrating like a scripture don't be hasty and build ur story

The Strongest Shinobi {Naruto}

EndGameNewWriter

3の人に「いいね!」しました

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EndGameNewWriter作者EndGameNewWriter

Thanks for your review, the only problem is that I have 20 chapters ahead of time so I won't be able to apply your advice before 20 chapters. Sorry!

3yr

aboshwkeyLv5aboshwkey

Okay .

3yr