Review Detail of Ikaris_Prime in SI Original in Teen Wolf

Item: SI Original in Teen Wolf
Rating: 3

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Ikaris_PrimeLv133yrIkaris_Prime

Not bad but you need a better background, longer chapters, and need to explain things better like his relationship with lydia and stiles or what all his powers can do.

SI Original in Teen Wolf

Bell_Ragnorok05

4の人に「いいね!」しました

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Bell_Ragnorok05作者Bell_Ragnorok05

thx for the advice i will try to add to the novel and make it better.

3yr

ZerolLv2Zerol

Is this dropped, (hopefully not) because i would like to see it continue and it has a lot of potential for growth. Good plot so far and main character seems like a good mc. Would be good if the chapters were longer tho. please continue as we (viewers) would like to see how the story develops

Bell_Ragnorok05:thx for the advice i will try to add to the novel and make it better.

2yr