The story was good however it was ruined when Erza cheated on him with jellal. Author I hope you will change this in your fic. Natsu didn't even do anything except saving jellal again because of her. My whole day has been ruined. Why can't people make fanfic without Ntr. Its just too disgusting.
Im_Groot
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いいねAnjali_RaVat:Thanks for doing this. Feeling very ecstatic at this moment. Thanks Author
The chapter was around 61 or something in fanfiction.com it was the time when jellal confess everything he and Erza did when Matsu was gone. I would like you to remove this whole ntr thing. Some people like me who tends to read the story by putting themselves in the mc shoes and when suddenly this shits come we got uncomfortable. You have written a good story however you should change the whole ordeal of Erza cheating on Natsu. Thanks for listening to my rant.
Im_Groot:Thank you for the review! Sorry, but I have written this novel long ago. I am working on grammar right now. So, can you please inform me about the chapter so I can look and change it?
Anjali_RaVat:The chapter was around 61 or something in fanfiction.com it was the time when jellal confess everything he and Erza did when Matsu was gone. I would like you to remove this whole ntr thing. Some people like me who tends to read the story by putting themselves in the mc shoes and when suddenly this shits come we got uncomfortable. You have written a good story however you should change the whole ordeal of Erza cheating on Natsu. Thanks for listening to my rant.
Hello, Thank you for the feedback. I have gone through the said chapters and will be changing them. So, there will be no NTR in the chapters published in WN. Once again, thank you for the feedback and please be free to recommend some changes ☺️.
Anjali_RaVat:The chapter was around 61 or something in fanfiction.com it was the time when jellal confess everything he and Erza did when Matsu was gone. I would like you to remove this whole ntr thing. Some people like me who tends to read the story by putting themselves in the mc shoes and when suddenly this shits come we got uncomfortable. You have written a good story however you should change the whole ordeal of Erza cheating on Natsu. Thanks for listening to my rant.
Im_Groot:Hello, Thank you for the feedback. I have gone through the said chapters and will be changing them. So, there will be no NTR in the chapters published in WN. Once again, thank you for the feedback and please be free to recommend some changes ☺️.
How did you even write Ntr . I cant even sleep because of it. Whenever I close my eyes the scenes of this comes in my mind. Im felling too nuch uncomfortable.
Im_Groot:Hello Anjali_RaVat, can I request you to change the review about the NTR part. Many readers will be scared away by it. Btw, I have already edited the chapters about NTR and you won't see it in this WN
Hello Anjali_RaVat, you know stories just form in your head. Some may be bad and some may be good. I needed a realistic scenario but maybe it wasn't such a great idea. Sorry for the inconvenience. - Groot
Anjali_RaVat:How did you even write Ntr . I cant even sleep because of it. Whenever I close my eyes the scenes of this comes in my mind. Im felling too nuch uncomfortable.
and btw can you remove the NTR part in your review. Many readers will feel uncomfortable. Thank you. - Groot
Im_Groot:Hello Anjali_RaVat, you know stories just form in your head. Some may be bad and some may be good. I needed a realistic scenario but maybe it wasn't such a great idea. Sorry for the inconvenience. - Groot
Dude why did you even write that ? I mean I understand that this is a fanfic but even among fanfic this isn't accurate Erza is one the most faithfullest girl if she is with natsu she will stay with him that's the type of girl she is, Even if you changed it in WN knowing that there was sh"t like this and there still is in another website don't give us the motivation to read this
Im_Groot:and btw can you remove the NTR part in your review. Many readers will feel uncomfortable. Thank you. - Groot
Im_Groot:Hello Anjali_RaVat, you know stories just form in your head. Some may be bad and some may be good. I needed a realistic scenario but maybe it wasn't such a great idea. Sorry for the inconvenience. - Groot
It was not realistic cause Erza wanted to hide this. It was like Natsu asked her about it and she just said how did you know ?
Im_Groot:Hello Anjali_RaVat, you know stories just form in your head. Some may be bad and some may be good. I needed a realistic scenario but maybe it wasn't such a great idea. Sorry for the inconvenience. - Groot
Wataray:Dude why did you even write that ? I mean I understand that this is a fanfic but even among fanfic this isn't accurate Erza is one the most faithfullest girl if she is with natsu she will stay with him that's the type of girl she is, Even if you changed it in WN knowing that there was sh"t like this and there still is in another website don't give us the motivation to read this