Review Detail of ujjwalanushka34 in The Runaway Huntress

The way you have written your story is extremely intriguing. The language you have chosen is showing the reader what's happening, rather than just telling. Based on experience, I can tell you it is something a lot of writers struggle with. So bravo your on the right track! One small suggestion would be try not to use "ly" ending verbs back to back in paragraphs. I feel like that is just going to enhance your writing. It is a just suggestion :) Yours story is really!