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ChuziLv22yrChuzi

i saw an error tho, for the second one you already know, story development seems natural, characters are real, world is something i've never seen before at least, no visible loopholes

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Prince_nonchalant

1の人に「いいね!」しました

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Prince_nonchalant作者Prince_nonchalant

Thanks for the review I must ask what error you noticed though?

2yr