Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in Witch of the Throne

The writing is solid. Many aspects of it are like a professional novel, though to me it goes a bit over-the-top for my tastes. I don't hold that against the writer though, it's more of a stylistic preference. The updates seem steady and the story development seems sound. The character design is good and she does a good job of immersing characters into the setting of the story. I would say the story could use a little more description of what the environment looks like, what the weather is like, the terrain, or what a town looks like. The description of the characters is solid and better than most wenbovel stories. The general narration is excellent. I can't think of issues with the dialogue.