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Xaact
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First few chapters Written very good, but it goes downhill after that. Mc is a person who can kill and destroy secret labs with more than 10k personel Mc also able to act as a vigilante killing villains Mostly from a certain organization, This shows that mc have experience and ability to do the deed. But! Here come the inconsistency, 1. a Certain newBie hero able to fatally wound mc. 2. MC clearly show no skill and Wisdom tHat Make his past deed possible. He’s acting like a total newbie. 3. World backstory is not clear at all, stuff goes places. 4. Plot hole, a certain policeman able to deduce that he’s the masked vigilante with no clear reason at all. there’s no witnesses or clear proof that mc is the reaper, but noo the police just said “yo, You’re the reaper aint Cha ya just popped up here 3 month ago blah blah.” and Mc jus meekly said “yes” come on dude people come and go All the time People without history Are normal, and mc does have hIstory! he have a family, his family are massacred, he goes missing for 10 Frickin years THAT should Plant a Gigantic red flag right after he popped out. 5. Too many inconsistencies About power system, skill, organization and character personality. I honestly cannot comprehend how a person who is able to kill and destroy a whole organization, a vigilante even is making stupid decisions its like The author decided to retcon his whole past to a newbie. First few chapters (before supermarket scene) are awesome, the rest is shit.

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I'll admit I haven't read past chapter 13 yet, but I disagree with all those points so far? First off, we know that he destroyed the facility in a single hit, and that too without a fight, and that too with the help of someone. And none of the fights in which he gets hurt has him trying to actively murder people. So, It's pretty obvious to me that he's just holding back. His true power is highy explosive, and he never wants that kind of destructive prowess in his day to day lives. He was stuck and he was tortured for years. Only when someone came to help him out of that state was he able to fight back. Pray tell when would he have gotten the fighting skills to get out of a brawl unscathed? When would he have gained this wisdom you speak of? And- The police officer's sister saw him and recognised him. It feels like you just dropped a review after just a bad skim my guy