Review Detail of Julkur in The Disparaged Run Away

The synopsis is interesting and made me spend some Power Stones, but this story is totally confusing. In a conversation with more than 3 participants it's impossible to understand who's talking. The grammar is so-so(worse than mine) But the worst part is indescribable! Bluarg... "ah, No" "Run" "No DADDY" Ok, with some fantasy you know what's happening but that's the worst writing style! 😣