just helping the author here... you should edit your earlier chapters because the improvement i see from the chapter titles alone tell me something it will help you very much
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thanks for that, I really appreciate it, I'm also planning to update the early chapters after I've finished this book
You should edit your chapters before you finished maybe you'll attract CE's and get contracted
Yamisen:thanks for that, I really appreciate it, I'm also planning to update the early chapters after I've finished this book