Review Detail of N0_Hope in Gamer's world online (dropped)

I really liked the main idea but the immersion to the world lacks of a lot of details , there are moments that I got a bit dizzy trying to read ( the sentences go in a weird loop ) and I need more. I know the author has worked on this and I'm not saying is bad, it's just that for me to read it it needs more details , more content and more concept of the characters ( I need to know a little of the people arround the MC )