Its really a good story....and no one can or will ever guess what's the ending of this story its really unique! the story moves fast too! it would be more great if you make the process slowly and make the readers attached to the male and female lead first....you ahould put space often too! but over all its a great story! love it! too sad its the end alreadyð
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