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MutedSith
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Splendid tale, I enjoyed almost every aspect of Jaguar’s ‘Jonas’ story, but I would have liked more emphasis on the romance between Tracer and your OC.

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That was on purpose. Because Tracer, shortly after their breakup, probably isn't interested in a romantic relationship. And Jaguar knows that he will probably die in his quest to destroy the eye. That's why he says goodbye to Sabrina and Pia. And visits his blood brother. It just happened that the two of them got closer and that romantic feelings develop between them. In the scene in Jaguar's cabin, this should come up. Tracer tries to talk him out of it and join Overwatch. But I deleted that paragraph.

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jonsimpsons:That was on purpose. Because Tracer, shortly after their breakup, probably isn't interested in a romantic relationship. And Jaguar knows that he will probably die in his quest to destroy the eye. That's why he says goodbye to Sabrina and Pia. And visits his blood brother. It just happened that the two of them got closer and that romantic feelings develop between them. In the scene in Jaguar's cabin, this should come up. Tracer tries to talk him out of it and join Overwatch. But I deleted that paragraph.