With a bit of editing this is perfect, I love the plot and how your description of the characters are they are relatable for me and they are also well written, I also love the settings and the portrayal of Filipino culture as well as the delicacies, it makes me hungry for the foods that are portrayed, yum. Keep on writing ð¯ and don't lose the motivation to write I'm cheering you on ð
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