Review Detail of Noleafyet in the lion and the tulip

The authors really know how to use the concept of "Showing and not telling" which is a very positive sign for me. Though its a goody, there's still a big untapped potential here especially if the author wants to get a contract. It can still improve further to the next level. Thus, I kindly suggest this improvement -Grammar improvement - I encourage using grammarly in your work. I believe you can take it to the next level. Wishing for the Best and Keep it up![img=recommend]