The most interesting fact is that you have taken the present world pandemic as a backdrop and woven a plot around your story. Not an innovation, but all the persons associated with the medical profession etc have made such a background for their story. I just read your first chapter and it is quite long perhaps equivalent to an ordinary book which would cover this material in 4-5 chapters. As far as the writing quality goes, I do not see any fault except for the long chapters and long paragraphs. Your command over the English language is good. However, if you want all persons to read your book, please use less bombastic words. Simple English will go a long way to get you readers from across the globe. Stability of updates is there. The story is developing nicely. The character design is good. World background is excellent. I am looking forward to continue reading your book. and it will remain in my library. All the best,Author!
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