Review Detail of Tattersalls in H**tai Artist Reborn as Demon General?!

Don't worry I'm just reviewing my work! This is my first novel I've ever made so I'd love for you to give me criticism at anytime. I also suck at staying consistent soo... sorry. Hey! If you think that my novel isn't half bad then please give me a vote. It keeps me motivated and helps me stay consistent. Now enjoy this picture of a cute dog.