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ky_rine
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I like the concept of this story, but since it has only two chapters so far, it is a bit hard to give a feedback. The language is okay, a few minor errors but not like I can't understand the meat of the work. I was a bit confused why fantasy when it focused on reality based work place, but yeah it is for the readers to find out why fantasy. It is an interesting read if you like webtoons.

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heavicedcoffee

1の人に「いいね!」しました

いいね

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Thank you! I appreciate this feedback so much :)