Review Detail of Apocalypse_ in One Piece Adventure

This fanfic is rated 3.9 right now. And it's quite low tbh. The quality of this fanfic is good. The plot is good. The 'wake up call' chapter and how the MC just lived casually/lazily without training himself are what people are having hard to digest. I don't blame them but their opinions are highly biased and baseless. I didn't find anything wrong with the story. My only concern is that I can't see a future path that the MC is going to take, which is making it a bit hard to anticipate a particular scenario for the futures. My suggestion for the Author would be to slightly increase the monologues or third-person speech to show what exactly MC is planning to do later on. The build up of the fanfic has been smooth and gradual; a bit too gradual, in fact. Right now, I've rated this as 4.2. I will come back and write a new review when I feel that this fanfic is not gonna be dropped anytime soon because from what I can see, it'll take hundreds chapters for this fanfic to be completed. P S: Try to be more detailed about known locations as well. It'll add to the beauty of this story. Your cake(story) is delicious, just icing on the cake(extra details to make the story more colourful) is required. Also, writing a good physical description of characters would also be a good idea. All this would easily add 1-2 more stars to anyone's review, including mine. SORRY FOR THE LONG REVIEW! THANKS! I have given you:- (4/5) for Writing Quality (4/5) for Story Development (4/5) for Character Design (5/5) for Updating Stability (4/5) for World Background. Overall : [4.2/5]