Review Detail of AGirlHasNoName20 in His Accountant Princess

While I don't usually read this sort of stories, I think you did an excellent job at keeping it exciting and dramatic, which I think is the key. The pacing might be a little bit rushed at times but I think it really works in order to keep the suspense and shock in the reader. Overall, I think this story is very interesting and I'm looking forward for the next chapter! Amazing job!