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It was good, unfortunately you fell into the game that everyone falls when they run out of ideas, which is to desperately follow the plot, it is seen that you have only seen the anime or maybe you have read the novel and tried to follow only the anime why it was more easy. Well, nothing more to say, it was good and had potential, unfortunately, it seems that you ran out of motivation or ideas and made many inconsistencies for example: Reactions, everything seems too meh without feeling if I have to say it seems that everyone already knew that He was a God and there were not many reactions or when he beat Otter or whatever Bette is called, there are no reactions it is as if people expected him and there is no feeling, in the end I still do not know why the protagonist liked Eina or Hestia I mean there is no romance or at least I saw it that way and about what did he fall in love with Ais, what the **** happened to Bell and Ais' reaction? I mean I don't see bell who is supposed to be in love with Ais reacting like meh and I don't see Ais talking so much good this is a mistake for sure, and there is a lot of unnecessary drama I understood the concept of making a character with bad luck without armor of the plot but I think it did not come out because if you read the armor of the plot it appears throughout the novel ... Well there are many things that are wrong but I already wrote too much and I am too lazy to reread the novel to get more errors, you may have Good morning brother, I hope that in the next novel you write you do not highlight so much the MC of the anime or novel that you make and treat the one you created better, you make him look like a filler character when the character that you created was supposed to be the MC and not the character of the existing novel, well I don't know if you understand what I mean that the character that you do should always be the main focus of the story and not leave it in the background just to follow the plot
Nani Da F*ck?!?! Is It Really Wrong To Just Rage Quit On The Dungeon?!
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I liked the novel at the beginning, and I gave it 4 stars previously, what happens is that I cannot read a novel that focuses too much on the canon is like watching the anime returned and it frustrates me because I come to look for something different. Of course I know the effort that the author puts into it but it is not my taste, something that only happens following the original story, it happens to me with all the fanfics of one piece or dragon ball, naruto and among others, I do not understand how people do You may like it, maybe it is people who have not seen the original and read it from there or there are people who like to reread stories, well to deal with it, being a story that desperately follows the canon more does surreal things than normally, like the little novel's feeling, reactions, mindless powers among others lead me to give it a low rating. I repeat the novel is not bad in itself or if it is bad but everyone has their own criteria and what seemed to me I already said before
KingShotaro:Oh well your right about the losing motivation part But seriously why do you have to rate it so low... The author is tired of pointless reviews And it is slowly ruining his life.. Yet he couldn't sleep properly Because of all the pointless negative reviews we are receiving..