Review Detail of Ryuu23 in Nani Da F*ck?!?! Is It Really Wrong To Just Rage Quit On The Dungeon?!

I was really pissed off by this fanfic, so I decided to give a bad review. I just feel sorry for the time spent on him. First I saw a "spoiler" where the hero's strength was revealed, combined with the harem tag, I expected a nice story with some drama and emotion. But in the end I ate a lot of "****". I will not list everything that I did not like, it will only upset me. I’ll just say that it would be better if the author adhered to his initial position, where MC does not have any advantages from the beginning and develops persistently. All these abilities from other souls ruined everything. But most of all I did not like the fight with Otar and its consequences. Even the interaction with Bell, as well as the forced growth of the latter strictly along the rails of the canon, despite the many changes in situations that allowed Bell to grow above him in the original story, did not happen here, did not affect in any way. The reactions of many of the characters are illogical or not revealed at all. And the only ones that were revealed a little ... are dead. Everything is so stupid. And I have listed quite a bit of what upset me. Although the main thing is. All this text written in CapsLock is very annoying and carries almost no semantic meaning, it is also annoying. In general, I tried to give an honest review, which came out at 1.8 points, rather than giving you 1 point. But my chair really burned out. In the comments, you wrote that you were going to give the entire harem of Bell to MC, and you will also think about showing Bell's weakness and indecision. And you had all the prerequisites for this. As I said before, the story initially did not allow Bell to grow as well as in the original story. And I'm not talking about stat points, but about his spirit and self-confidence. But you still changed these events, no matter how illogical they looked around Bell. Even Lily started hanging out with Bell. In general, there is too much illogical here. Even the amount of money that the hero earned is illogical. You seem to have set out to ruin his life and push him along the path of aggression and a shattered psyche. This is not what I expected when I started reading. You had a good opportunity to make an interesting story with netori elements, but you just ****ed it up.