Review Detail of GangikaKing in An Adventure in the One Piece World.

All in all a good start. The main character seems a little rash and weird at times, but it makes sense given his past. The character and setting descriptions are on point and the world definitely feels like something that would fit right in with One Piece. Though I’m worried the story will take a turn should he find a random powerful devil fruit instead of growing stronger by continuing his training. At the moment that seems unlikely. I do hope to see more strange and wacky fights in the future though. Since that’s the charm in allot of the combat in One Piece. Devil fruits aren’t the only way to do this. Different weapons, unique fighting styles and special techniques are all apart of what I enjoy about the fights in One Piece. You don’t need to copy and paste Oda’s writing style or anything, what you’ve been doing is enjoyable. But a blend of your own style and the original style is what makes a really good fanfic. Just my two cents on the matter. GL