Review Detail of Morning_Fragrance in The Devourer Emperor: A DxD FanFic

Writing quality is alright, but the issue is really just the grammar; mainly characters talking, it becomes a headache to try and figure out who's talking since at one moment questionable mc is talking before the overly mysterious system is suddenly talking. 3 stars, I usually give a solid one for **** like this but since the writing quality is a lot better than a lot of the ****ty DxD fanfics I've read; I'll make an exception. Stability of updates, quick releases but short chapters. For those who read at a college level, it's a curse. I give it 3 stars. Story development is okay, a lot of holes that need to be filled in though some can't. An example would be how the **** did the father move a corpse so quickly and efficiently without getting caught? Also weren't there neighbors who noticed the abusive household? 2 fucking stars, yikes. Character design is a fat 1 star simply due to how the broken family, mc seeing everything as fake and not slightly genuine, and of course; classic system personalities. World background gets a 1 not because it's DxD, but due to not writing out the scenery like shops, the looks of people around, how depressing the sky looks; the important little details that make reading enjoyable and so that we're not seeing two people in an empty space talking. My conclusion has come to this, it's a throwaway read. Out of chapters for whatever CN cliche filled garbage? Well here you go, go grind some reading time for Qidian's scummy shop for vouchers.