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MeltStointy
MeltStointy作者4yrMeltStointy

Hi! Shameless Author review here... Every single chapter will have 500 - 600 words each, but I will try to post 3 chapters a day. Please, type what do you think about the story so far! I will try to write the entirety of his past fast enough for us to finally start with DxD. (I guess another 4 or 5 chapters, and we'll start the fun!) Other than that, please suggest Harem Members here, I'll think about each and every single one of them (If they can fit what I have in mind or not)

The Devourer Emperor: A DxD FanFic

MeltStointy

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Dragon_King_Marcel
Dragon_King_MarcelLv4Dragon_King_Marcel

For harem go for sona, yasaka

muriceking
muricekingLv4muriceking

Grayfia,Sona,yasaka,Akeno,Tiamat,ravel,Kuroka,irina

Masterix
MasterixLv5Masterix

it's okay to have harem but not more than 3. I recommend Grayfia, Yasaka and Rossweisse. it's okay to have Sona too but she is a heir so if you add her she will be the main girl...

Masterix
MasterixLv5Masterix

I'll be a Shameless Reader then... i don't care about your 500-600 words per chapter as long as you release more chapter... about 10 per day 😝😝😝

MeltStointy
MeltStointy作者MeltStointy

TFW you actually released 18 chapters in two days = 9 chapters in a day

Masterix:I'll be a Shameless Reader then... i don't care about your 500-600 words per chapter as long as you release more chapter... about 10 per day 😝😝😝
rrrrrrrr10
rrrrrrrr10Lv4rrrrrrrr10

Xenovia,irina,Sona , serfall, lavinia

DarylArradaza
DarylArradazaLv3DarylArradaza

Don't mind about people wanting a few harem members, this is your story and dxd have many women to be conquered... Rias deserves love and also Tsubaki. So having 30plus women is fine and trust me I know you can do it.

Lord_Dao_Creation
Lord_Dao_CreationLv4Lord_Dao_Creation

Well its your story i don't think it's my place to give suggestions. But i'll be shameless as someone great once said- ''The world belongs to the shameless''. So here's my thought- Add Asia (she's way too cute to be left behind) Rossweisse, Kuroka, Xenovia. Oh and if you decided on grafia don't cuck Sirzechs without any reason or atleast show that he also loved someone else who he then ended up with and their wedding was just a farce.

Lord_Dao_Creation
Lord_Dao_CreationLv4Lord_Dao_Creation

Oh and don't forget about Levia-tan.

Lord_Dao_Creation:Well its your story i don't think it's my place to give suggestions. But i'll be shameless as someone great once said- ''The world belongs to the shameless''. So here's my thought- Add Asia (she's way too cute to be left behind) Rossweisse, Kuroka, Xenovia. Oh and if you decided on grafia don't cuck Sirzechs without any reason or atleast show that he also loved someone else who he then ended up with and their wedding was just a farce.
MeltStointy
MeltStointy作者MeltStointy

Asia..I'm heavily thinking about her in these days.. She's way too cute to let her being saved by the Issei dude.

Lord_Dao_Creation:Well its your story i don't think it's my place to give suggestions. But i'll be shameless as someone great once said- ''The world belongs to the shameless''. So here's my thought- Add Asia (she's way too cute to be left behind) Rossweisse, Kuroka, Xenovia. Oh and if you decided on grafia don't cuck Sirzechs without any reason or atleast show that he also loved someone else who he then ended up with and their wedding was just a farce.
Lord_Dao_Creation
Lord_Dao_CreationLv4Lord_Dao_Creation

I agree wholeheartedly.

MeltStointy:Asia..I'm heavily thinking about her in these days.. She's way too cute to let her being saved by the Issei dude.
ShutTheFuckUp_
ShutTheFuckUp_Lv14ShutTheFuckUp_

i suggest Gabriel .-. click the like button if u want her too👇🏽

DarylArradaza
DarylArradazaLv3DarylArradaza

Hey Author make a discord

MeltStointy
MeltStointy作者MeltStointy

Well..I don't have time to create it from scratch, so I'll just create one with the essentials..

DarylArradaza:Hey Author make a discord
DarylArradaza
DarylArradazaLv3DarylArradaza

I can help you because I'm liking your story and don't worry about the other people saying that limit the harem because dd has many women to be conqured

MeltStointy:Well..I don't have time to create it from scratch, so I'll just create one with the essentials..
MeltStointy
MeltStointy作者MeltStointy

https://discord.gg/KyjygcN

DarylArradaza:I can help you because I'm liking your story and don't worry about the other people saying that limit the harem because dd has many women to be conqured
Mythical_Soul
Mythical_SoulLv3Mythical_Soul

I really like ur book. Due to a mistake done by my cousin I had to re upload one of my books which was doing very well, it literally has zero votes now ( used to have 54 votes in the original ). So could u please help me by giving my novel ( Reborn in Narutoverse with a Unique system ) a shoutout and a honest review. I will really appreciate it . Thank u

Hdhzgshsh
HdhzgshshLv3Hdhzgshsh

Garbage 🗑

Xrkerr
XrkerrLv3Xrkerr

So far so good. I'm enjoying everything about the story so far. As for harem members, would you be able to give some of the older girls some love e.g. Venelena, Grafiya, Yasaka and Lady Phenex? They're all way too good to be left alone. Oh and Kuroka and Akeno!

Azathoth_PlotGod
Azathoth_PlotGodLv5Azathoth_PlotGod

Soooooo. When are you coming back?