Review Detail of Pogiako_Jazz in We choose our own destiny

I'm only on chapter 18 but so far I like it. The romance in this is interesting. It doesn't feel forced but it does feel rushed a bit mainly because of the time skips and the limited interactions we saw them at the beginning of the romance between the MC and the love interest. The only complaint I have would be the writing. Although not horrible, the writing seems a little limited. For example the author loves a couple of words so far which are ''Signalizing and Regarding/regarded''. These words are present on most of the paragraphs and is used too often. It would've been better if it were replaced with other words. The training arc seems a little rushed for me as well, only glossing over some stuff during the MC's training after a big timeskip. And by glossing I mean only having a paragraph or 2 or maybe just a sentence in a paragraph. Some people might like that but in my opinion it just felt a bit rushed. Overall I like the FF so far, it's enjoyable to read and see the interaction between the MC and his love interest. I recommend reading this FF.