Review Detail of TurquoiseTurtle in Welcome to the Akashic Records Office
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Your grammar is amazing and I love the characters. I also love how the story is progressing but I do think you need to go more in depth and explain things like his powers and abilities or the things he gets from Kevin.
Welcome to the Akashic Records Office
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Lord_Hallow作者Lord_Hallow
Thanks for the positive review! I will make sure to do that more from now on. The MC hasn't really had a chance to use any of his abilities other than Arc of Embodiment and his Realm.... which I'm now realizing I haven't stated has time dilation. Thanks for pointing this out constructively and letting me know where I can make improvements to my writing. *thumbs up*