This novel is unique and interesting in my opinion. Keep up the release rate and you are destined to be in top 10! About the story: World is not too detailed but this helps the story progressing. Balance between real the world and virtual reality is good. You will not get confused. Not much grammar errors. The story is progressing in good pace. Good flirting and R-16 scenes. Advice: Do not repeat the last sentence of the previous chapter in the next chapter. That's just takes up the space. You can add a bit more details and use a wider range of words. I don't know how the MC looks like, please change this! (This review is made when the novel just started and I will change it as time passes. Hope everyone gained something from this post.)
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