I've never seen this many fonts in a story before. It was illegible. Thus, the low rating. I couldnt read a thing. To improve the legibility of the story, I recommend that the author: - uses a single font for the story - doesnt make paragraphs larger than 3 to 4 sentences. - uses linebreaks between the spoken words of diffrent characters. - looks at the formatting of popular stories and adopts that formatting for optimal legibility.
Illuminati
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いいねYw. Try to have a dyslexic friend read it tough. A surprisingly large number of dyslexic people read in their spare time to compensate. Im dyslexic so im sure you can imagine that it can be quite a struggle with a single font, not to mention the horror that is multiple fonts. I recommend looking at the formatting that top novels like the mech touch and the oracle paths do in situatiknstwhere you prefer to swap fonts. It might help with finding a good alternative.
Illuminati:I'll do what you have suggested and I didn't even thought of it as an problem due to the fact I was capable of reading the font fine for me I should've gotten one of my friends too read it first and give me their thoughts before publishing thank you for the review.