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pauperprincess
pauperprincessLv104yr
2020-05-20 15:31

Dropped this book. Characters: I could not continue after chapter 28. FL is dumb. Just a day or two ago, you and your husband kiss in front of your ex. There's nothing wrong with that because your ex is a scum of a man and he deserves to know you're truly over. BUT!! you actually invite him over to ask your ex to pretend to be still together to attend a family dinner?! I get that you're reluctant to tell your parents you married your sister's fiancee, but at least tell your parents the truth that you've broken up with your ex. Ex is a scum. ML is good enough for me. At least, so far, he's straightforward with the FL. He wants to try having a real relationship with ger and not just be married for the sake of marriage. ML's friends: they're okay too. Confused about some of the characters. Especially during the scene where they were playing mahjong and had dinner after. FL's sister: don't know why she ran away from the engagement party. No comment about her. FL's parents: dad has been absent so far. Mom is ???? Can't say anything about them. Translation: is okay. Need a proofreader or an editor. Some parts are confusing because of the wrong use of names and pronouns. Story/Plot: Cliche but I still wanted to read it at first. Not going to continue.

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ChewyMochi
ChewyMochiLv6

Sold, useful review. Thanks for the heads up! :)

harshdeep_benipal
harshdeep_benipalLv1

it's actually not bad, her character is portrayed with a level of mystery. I read the 60 chapters and it's honestly not cliche but a little cure a sweet. She although dense as to what she did it actually turns real good after that point, she also seems sheltered as she's not sure what to do. I'm not saying you have to continue but I believe you should give the 60 chapters a try it's better then most stories with FL being so dense she gets hurt. SPOILER, after that chapter the ML is also present,he understands her delima so it's really you cute!!!

pauperprincess
pauperprincessLv10

We'll see. :) i'll give it a few days before i jump back to this. Haha. If you've got other good books to share, feel free to tell me. I'm in a mood to binge-read before work starts again soon. 😊😊

harshdeep_benipal:it's actually not bad, her character is portrayed with a level of mystery. I read the 60 chapters and it's honestly not cliche but a little cure a sweet. She although dense as to what she did it actually turns real good after that point, she also seems sheltered as she's not sure what to do. I'm not saying you have to continue but I believe you should give the 60 chapters a try it's better then most stories with FL being so dense she gets hurt. SPOILER, after that chapter the ML is also present,he understands her delima so it's really you cute!!!
pauperprincess
pauperprincessLv10

We'll see. :) i'll give it a few days before i jump back to this. Haha. If you've got other good books to share, feel free to tell me. I'm in a mood to binge-read before work starts again soon. 😊😊

harshdeep_benipal:it's actually not bad, her character is portrayed with a level of mystery. I read the 60 chapters and it's honestly not cliche but a little cure a sweet. She although dense as to what she did it actually turns real good after that point, she also seems sheltered as she's not sure what to do. I'm not saying you have to continue but I believe you should give the 60 chapters a try it's better then most stories with FL being so dense she gets hurt. SPOILER, after that chapter the ML is also present,he understands her delima so it's really you cute!!!
queridamia
queridamiaLv1

Oh lol it's so stupid when FLs get treated like shit by their exes and don't bat an eye but when, say, the ML actually is decent towards them, they don't want it.

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