Review Detail of kwertyu in One Piece - Martialised
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lol at first i thought this was going to be a good fanfic without the author fanboying to the strawhats but then it turned to a typical one piece novel and yes he didn't join the strawhats but he is just with yhem the whole time, it's basically him joining without really joining them the author is pretending to be a deep thinker and already planning the "BIG THING" but lol no the only thing happening so far is the mc beating up luffy's enemy while he bumps into them, that's basically the whole patern of the story so far (the mc goes to an island defeat the enemy luffy was supposed to take down and show everyone how "MIGHTY" he is and them bump into strawhats) what a fucking joke
One Piece - Martialised
bobbarker12
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fanboying? The **** are you talking about? I‘m pretending to be a deep thinker. I wonder where you got that impression from since I‘ve never stated anything that could lead you to that conclusion. Should you be refering to my creativity then please, go ahead and show me how to do it better. I‘m always open to learn. Oh and the „bumping“ as you called it has a reason that is pretty obvious if you know anything about one piece, you know? I don‘t mind constructive critisism but your review is nothing more then listing what you disliked without giving advice on what to improve. Please man, stop venting your frustrations on my story and write your own instead. Would be better for both of us^^
I mean, the fact that this is basically a rehash of One Piece w/ an OP OC is a good enough reason for most people to hate it. People usually want One Piece OC fanfictions with an interesting protagonist that goes off and does their own thing, exploring the bigass One Piece world. When they get an OC that basically just hovers around a single crew, they think, fuq, you might as well have just read One Piece or done another character SI from the canon. People have already read One Piece. They don't need to read a less balanced V2. But then again, there are people who like this kind of stuff, and fanfictions were never meant to be some serious form of literature. It's just an expression of what if "this" happened instead of "that"? Literally, that's the definition of fanfiction. The concept of your fanfic is bound to have a lot of haters, author. But then again, also a lot of fanatics. It's kind of like a BTS Wattpad fanfiction... Hehe. I'll just leave this here.
bobbarker12:fanboying? The **** are you talking about? I‘m pretending to be a deep thinker. I wonder where you got that impression from since I‘ve never stated anything that could lead you to that conclusion. Should you be refering to my creativity then please, go ahead and show me how to do it better. I‘m always open to learn. Oh and the „bumping“ as you called it has a reason that is pretty obvious if you know anything about one piece, you know? I don‘t mind constructive critisism but your review is nothing more then listing what you disliked without giving advice on what to improve. Please man, stop venting your frustrations on my story and write your own instead. Would be better for both of us^^
Aung_Myint_Myat_8776:I planing to read but......better not.....
The_Bored_Immortal:nah man read it I personaly like it a lot it is a very interesting book
In the end it is your decision if you read or not. It takes a little different view of the one piece world from the first chapters to the latest with the theory about awakening devil fruits. I think it's a good book.
Supreme_Devil:I don't know man, it doesn't seem legit to me.