Now this one's good! I already read the first five chapters and I liked it. I just noticed that there are few little errors, but it's just the placement of the past and present tenses, and it's not that bad. I mean, I make mistakes on that too hehehe. And I say, I indeed like the story, it's really interesting. I love how natural and realistic it is written even though it is a fantasy. While reading it, I noticed that it has funny scenes also which I actually enjoyed. This is fun to read. Keep up the good work author!Now, I'm just waiting for updatesð.
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