Review Detail of WinterQween in His mom fall in love with me at first sight

The author takes great care to showcase the FL and how her life is which I think is a great choice. Really lets us see what type of person she is (i.e. kind, helpful, etc). There are some grammatical and spelling errors that take away from it stylistically but don't affect the quality of the story. Seems like a very light hearted read, hoping the author continues!