Review Detail of amaturewriter in Solo Leveling with a System

Item: Solo Leveling with a System
Rating: 5

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amaturewriterLv44yramaturewriter

OLE.....Hurray..finally an Si fanfic for this book...look its all good....grammar, story and structure....just longer chps would be nice...also...make MC a one man army thats the entire reason why this stories so epic......add some romance and fluff..no sad ****...maybe world travel....anyway goodluck and goodshow

Solo Leveling with a System

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JakeElliottLv14JakeElliott

Not all good, I spotted a few grammar mistakes, hell one of the title's is spelled wrong :p Your right though, only Si I found on this novel. People normally wouldn't do it as the MC already is OP, and has a system so there wouldn't be anything original stemming from it. Still a nice read though.

4yr

amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

when you are desperate everything is good

JakeElliott:Not all good, I spotted a few grammar mistakes, hell one of the title's is spelled wrong :p Your right though, only Si I found on this novel. People normally wouldn't do it as the MC already is OP, and has a system so there wouldn't be anything original stemming from it. Still a nice read though.

4yr