Review Detail of Unlimited_bw_1729 in Grandpa Universe In Multiverse [COMPLETE]

Very enjoyable and wholesome(for the most part). No edgy mc because of tragic back story. A mature MC,non-Harem,multiple platonic relationships,very good choice of multiverse(for the most part) and mostly stuck to the lore of the world,except modifications made to incorporate the MCs history in that world was wonky sometimes. One Piece being an incomplete story made for some extreme theorizing,but it's kinda acceptable. I really enjoyed my time reading it. Paragraph comments were extremely funny and add to your experience. Better than his other HP fic.