This author explains everything too much. MC talks in his mind while comments everything he see. If he talks a line, he will think and talk to himself in his mind 3 paragraphs. Its annoying to read all those. Wastage of time on focusing unwanted things. Novel is good except that.
MotivatedSloth
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