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Item: The flashes op twin brother.
Rating: 3.6

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amaturewriterLv44yramaturewriter

I like it but damit the structure is ****ed up....pls fix it...**: if harem max 5 anymore and its stupid....anyway good luck and dont neuter MC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The flashes op twin brother.

Etiger789

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ShinkaioLv5Shinkaio

True, people who give a limit to harem are pretty dumb. I mean it's like the mc fill the quota of women in his bed... I'm okay if he love 10 000 women but having women just to have them..

4yr

Etiger789作者Etiger789

Thanks for the review.I totally agree when it comes to my sentence structure.But don't worry I'll try to improve on it.

4yr

CHAOSLv11CHAOS

Lol just writing their names will take few chaps 😂😂🤣🤣

Shinkaio:True, people who give a limit to harem are pretty dumb. I mean it's like the mc fill the quota of women in his bed... I'm okay if he love 10 000 women but having women just to have them..

3yr