Review Detail of MrYamcha in Hunter x Hunter Fanfic
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This is constructive criticism only. The writung quality is just an ok since you dont start dialogue with capital letters and regular stuff like that but it might be your first time writing. Plus the timeskip training is pretty weird since it’s his first time in this world you shouldve showed his training seeing that he went from regular human strength to jumping off ships unharmed. These are my only complaints and in the future training i hope you kinda write about it even a little bit. I will continue to read i have high expectations for you no pressure
Hunter x Hunter Fanfic
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Thanks for the review this is my second fanfic and for the capital letter problem i'm pretry sure they are many more like that, i guess the main cause is because i'm using my phone to write and I know its a terrible excuse but i'll try to fix as many mistakes as i can. for the time skip training i personally hate them😅 (well just the whole just got to the hxh world better learn nen, its in every story) i rather to jump right into the story and slowly show the result of the training which would give the reader an idea without the whole explaining part... Tbh now i'm thinking its a terrible way to write fanfic like that (not the first time someone mention me skipping the training😬)