The first person perspective in your novel is well blended with the storyline that you build. As the characters are dealing with the aftermath of the apocalypse, I can say that your story is marvellous. It's just your story is too 'short' that I find it hard to emphasize on some moments (Only some. Others are done beautifully). If you can make it a bit longer and add some details at certain points, I believe that it'll be emotionally great.
LinYang
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