Item: One Piece: Storm Adventure
Rating: 1

ThesenileoldfoolLv45yr

2019-06-10 10:09

Chapters are way to short, the 25 chapters you released should barely be 10 chapters... This kinds of ruins your story mate, it got a lot of potential but your not really capitalising on it.. I've got faith in it that why I've added it to my library but If you remove the chapters and make them longer instead this would be pretty interesting. I will give a better review when you've changed this.

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