Review Detail of Iring_na_itom in Quicksword Bob

I just read first 4-5 chapters so I can't judge what happen in later chapters.. maybe it become good? about the chapters I read there are many mistakes and mc just eat and sleep in his 10yrs stay in Luffy's Village 😂 so i decided not to read anymore ... If you found the latter chapters good please comment here so I can read it later Thanks 👍😊