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SauceMaster64
SauceMaster64Lv65yrSauceMaster64

"He is careless and she whisper" pala! LOL Talaga tol, wrong grammar bruh "He is careless and she whisper" pala! LOL Talaga tol, wrong grammar bruh "He is careless and she whisper" pala! LOL Talaga tol, wrong grammar bruh

Careless Whisper

stoutnovelist

Liked it!

いいね

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stoutnovelist
stoutnovelist作者stoutnovelist

Yes po?

5yr
SauceMaster64
SauceMaster64Lv6SauceMaster64

Sorry bro, wrong grammar po ung "she whisper"

stoutnovelist:Yes po?
5yr
stoutnovelist
stoutnovelist作者stoutnovelist

I see po. Ano po ang tama? I will edit po. Salamat bro. ❤

5yr
stoutnovelist
stoutnovelist作者stoutnovelist

Sorry bro, ano ang tama? Edit ko siya. Salamat in advance bro. ❤

SauceMaster64:Sorry bro, wrong grammar po ung "she whisper"
5yr
SauceMaster64
SauceMaster64Lv6SauceMaster64

First of all, kapag she (singular pronoun), ang verb na kasunod ay nasa S-form (may s sa dulo). Yun lng naman ung wrong grammar. Pero kapag gusto mo ng cool effect, gamit ka ng parallelism. Look -> He is careless. Subject verb adjective She whispers. Subject verb I don't know how you can improve it this way, but you can keep it in mind.

stoutnovelist:Sorry bro, ano ang tama? Edit ko siya. Salamat in advance bro. ❤
5yr
stoutnovelist
stoutnovelist作者stoutnovelist

Sige bro. Salamat

SauceMaster64:First of all, kapag she (singular pronoun), ang verb na kasunod ay nasa S-form (may s sa dulo). Yun lng naman ung wrong grammar. Pero kapag gusto mo ng cool effect, gamit ka ng parallelism. Look -> He is careless. Subject verb adjective She whispers. Subject verb I don't know how you can improve it this way, but you can keep it in mind.
5yr
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