Review Detail of ShuraTheDestroyer in Dante in DXD

Item: Dante in DXD
Rating: 1

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ShuraTheDestroyerLv44yrShuraTheDestroyer

Well, the character is a generic(a bad copy of Dante) bland and boring. The grammar is not good, makes it difficult to understand, although my grammar is no big deal, even for me it was difficult to read this story. Instead of having only the original character in the dxd world he used a lot of elements from other stories, which "spoiled" the story in my opinion, not to mention that there is no development of the characters and the world.

Dante in DXD

Scarlet_Slayer

6の人に「いいね!」しました

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MilkGodLv11MilkGod

Ok, first thing is the MC wanted to look like Dante from DMC not be him, also gaining his weapons. 2nd grammar is ok, only mistakes I've found so far are the uses of him, she, they, when talking about characters. (Narrative view.) 3rd Author said they do this for fun.

4yr

ShuraTheDestroyerLv4ShuraTheDestroyer

Even if it was created for fun, it could have been done better, in my opinion.

MilkGod:Ok, first thing is the MC wanted to look like Dante from DMC not be him, also gaining his weapons. 2nd grammar is ok, only mistakes I've found so far are the uses of him, she, they, when talking about characters. (Narrative view.) 3rd Author said they do this for fun.

4yr