The story as a whole, is an awesome concept. I'm SUPER interested in the next States of evolution and skills that the (Nameless?) MC will acquire. Now in my opinion the development of the story is going a little fast (Patience Acquired) for me but I am new to WN so I'm not real sure how most story progression goes on here. All in all great job and keep it updated.
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