Review Detail of AnWan in Monster Integration

thanks! Looks like I need to wait for a week before reading it

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Story with first perspective alway

If your consider those chapters to be edited then your understanding of english is even worse than i thought.

Some are edited while some are not

Bro, we'll edit the previous chapters for you. For free. If you want. It's just that the unedited chapters are spoiling the whole thing.

Ok

Lmao ikr exactly what i was thinking

Definitely need to re edit the 40 first chapters ... i saw a comment telling that it get better at 36... but for now i cant read farther than chapter 4. The story looks good and there is a lot of work, its sad to loose so many reader because of just some chapters

Keep to your word, start the editing process and we shall see at the bottom of the chapters you have fixed your name and a special shoutout, I look forward to seeing it.

I'll start from next week. In middle of finals right now😅 As soon as I'm done with em, I'll start editing em and posting in comments section. Ciao

I'm enjoying the Story and the Content. I will admit I am struggling a great deal with what I think is grammar. Here is a tip I got in school have your work read out loud (there are app you can use to have things read to you) to you if it dosen't sound like something some one is talking it Probably needs more editing.

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hi is this an op mc?

hi is this an op mc?

I'm afraid I need to agree with some of the other statements. Please find a different editor and get them to go over the first several chapters. I had to stop reading after the third time a 'he' pronoun was used for a 'she'

Thank you for your comment. Would you mind telling me which chapters you have found these mistakes in?

Actually, I might have gotten you mixed up with someone else regarding pronouns, but as for which chapter needs edited for this particular work, all of them. Add me on discord Lastear#3196, and then send me, say, chapter 88. I'll proofread it for you and point out the most common mistakes and explain them so you can apply it to other chapters.

Or you can forward it to your editor to fix.

Bro it is already a premium novel, you should find a good Editor soon... Even the edited ones are not that good, if you need a good one contact me..